OMG, Eleanor, this is fantastic. How did I let a week go by before I read this installment? Even the pretensions have pretensions! Even the self-deceptions are deceptive. There are so many great lines, I can't begin to quote them. It's just like Chekhov said, if a knife appears in a sink full of soap.
I'm going to pour myself a dram before I read today's.
Well, between this installment and Ben’s latest on HH, you’ve both defined jaw-dropping! When Ros was just out with it, when Scott responded as he did. OMG. OMG. In judgement of others indeed. I’m seconding David. You’ve done such a brilliant job creating these characters that, jaw-dropping as their actions may be, they are totally believable. I’ve said it before, and I’m sure I’ll say it again. I simply love your writing.
That was exciting! Actions are consistent but the "actors'" views of what's going on are warped by their perceptions. And the perceptions are totally believable based on the scaffolding of the characters' history that you created.
That is so good to hear, thanks for feeding that back to me. One never knows, we build and build and hope it's been enough... Again, once this is over, I'll talk about this chapter in broader terms.
OMG, Eleanor, this is fantastic. How did I let a week go by before I read this installment? Even the pretensions have pretensions! Even the self-deceptions are deceptive. There are so many great lines, I can't begin to quote them. It's just like Chekhov said, if a knife appears in a sink full of soap.
I'm going to pour myself a dram before I read today's.
Exactly! If a knife appears in a sink full of soup..... Thanks, Jay.
Holy smokes!! I KNEW Ros was gonna get it, too bad just the "tip"...! 😂🤪 Good lord, what next?
🙃🤐😬 She was always going to get it.... 😂
haha Who's the crazy one now, Ros?
Ha. Right.
Very fun read!
Thank you, Jaap. Glad you enjoyed it.
Electrifying! I can't wait for the after party's aftermath.
It's coming.... 😬
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Well, between this installment and Ben’s latest on HH, you’ve both defined jaw-dropping! When Ros was just out with it, when Scott responded as he did. OMG. OMG. In judgement of others indeed. I’m seconding David. You’ve done such a brilliant job creating these characters that, jaw-dropping as their actions may be, they are totally believable. I’ve said it before, and I’m sure I’ll say it again. I simply love your writing.
Thanks so much, Holly. 😊 It means the world to hear that.
"Six adults and a child, staring into the ruins of their realities" ... Pulling the threads together and bringing all to the fore: Kudos, Eleanor.
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Wow, I am totally hooked, Eleanor. Not an easy scene to write but it gripped me.
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Completely riveting.
Thanks, Alisa.
So good.
Thanks, Willow.
That was exciting! Actions are consistent but the "actors'" views of what's going on are warped by their perceptions. And the perceptions are totally believable based on the scaffolding of the characters' history that you created.
That is so good to hear, thanks for feeding that back to me. One never knows, we build and build and hope it's been enough... Again, once this is over, I'll talk about this chapter in broader terms.