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Elaine R. Frieman's avatar

Your writing is just so beautiful. Eek the foreboding of what will happen next. πŸ™ˆπŸ€žπŸ»πŸ«ΆπŸ»

Eleanor Anstruther's avatar

Thank you so much Elaine.

Emily Charlotte Powell's avatar

Wow…. For it all. The pagan wedding, the wellies, the beauty and the trauma and the devastation and the telling.

Julie Gabrielli's avatar

The musicality of this passage is glorious. What a scene and what a blow.

Eleanor Anstruther's avatar

Thanks Julie. It was.

Holly Starley's avatar

My goodness, Eleanor. So much power packed into such a tiny punch (of space).

And oh those moments of knowing.

Eleanor Anstruther's avatar

Oh those moments

Susie Mawhinney's avatar

I hadn't remembered until I did... πŸ’”

Wendy Varley's avatar

That is so traumatic, Eleanor. It must have been a shock indeed to find out at the same time as your other guests.

So vividly told, as always.

Racheblue Love's avatar

:( <3

Robbie's avatar

The Yin and Yang Weekend of all Yin and Yang weekends...........

Elizabeth Bobrick's avatar

Just bought the book! My hippie days were so grotty and yours so cool!

Eleanor Anstruther's avatar

They had their grotty moments for sure… πŸ˜¬πŸ™ƒ And thank you very much for buying the book.

Prajna O'Hara's avatar

Beautiful gripping and shocking

Thank you

Eleanor Anstruther's avatar

thank you Prajna

Kim.'s avatar

Sublime reading, Eleanor. And thisβ€”β€œAnd I remember thinking, You should have told me first.”—the honesty in your telling is what breaks the heart open.

Margaret Bennett's avatar

You gave me shivers.

Isabel Cowles Murphy's avatar

Magnificent.

Simone Senisin's avatar

"We walked the ribbons, you and I; yellow and blue, I the sun and you the moon, your dog running, me on the arm of my father, he wore a tweed suit and wellies, a pheasant feather stuck in a deerstalker hat." Love this image of your father ... I listen to your voice as I follow ... except I found my eyes racing ahead at the "phone call" of course. Shit. Horror

Unha Engels's avatar

Oh man. What a moment. The photo looked like something from hundreds years ago (in the most beautiful way).

Eleanor Anstruther's avatar

It was fairytale in every way.

Ana Salote's avatar

That's such a refinement of tragedy it's a white out, runs alongside a kind of beauty in a mysterious way. Wouldn't dare it in fiction.